Re: The Poetry Topic

Shining Darkness · Shining Darkness on Wed Apr 16, 2008 6:08 am

indeed it is.

Press2000 · Press2000 on Wed Apr 16, 2008 11:12 pm

call me nerdy, but my brother was watching an educational channel in the other room, and it was about comets. I suffered a major burst of inspiration and this was the result;
~*~

Comet

Sky Fire
Night Flame
Heart Fear
Mind wonder

Star falling,
Falling down to me.
Night crashing,
Crashing onto me.

Light coming,
Coming soon.
Wonder and fear,
Brilliance and death.

Night Crashing
Star Flashing
Light Coming

Shining Darkness · Shining Darkness on Thu Apr 17, 2008 9:11 am

Press2000 wrote:call me nerdy, but my brother was watching an educational channel in the other room, and it was about comets. I suffered a major burst of inspiration and this was the result;
~*~

Comet

Sky Fire
Night Flame
Heart Fear
Mind wonder

Star falling,
Falling down to me.
Night crashing,
Crashing onto me.

Light coming,
Coming soon.
Wonder and fear,
Brilliance and death.

Night Crashing
Star Flashing
Light Coming

lol.. on the second day of school someone called my nerdy.

Dreamer · Dreamer on Fri Apr 18, 2008 6:55 am

that's so mean!

Shining Darkness · Shining Darkness on Fri Apr 18, 2008 7:33 am

Not exactly... What i said made me sound kinda nerdy...

I had beaten a lot of games, some with amazing times, some multiple times, and read harry potter 7 three times in a month.

Lol.. I didn't mind.

Dreamer · Dreamer on Sat Apr 19, 2008 4:07 am

lol but still that's really mean...

Press2000 · Press2000 on Wed Apr 23, 2008 5:04 am

I have...three.... >.<
~-*-~-*-~

Be Free

Fly high,
My love.
Touch the highest mountain,
Let your golden wings soar.
Sail away,
My only.
Find the greatest city,
And let your ship go fast.
Soar far,
My dear.
Kiss the brightest star.
And let yourself go.
Be strong,
My love.
Let yourself be free.
~*~

No Meaning

Poems and words,
Just poems and words
Nothing of meaning

Lines that fall deaf
To ears that wont listen
To my cries and pleas

Tears falling in vain
In front of eyes
That will not watch

Lullabies and whispers
Just lullabies and whispers
Nothing to you
~*~

I am here!

Don’t you see me?
Can’t you hear me?
Can’t you feel me?
Do you not know me?

I am here!
I am crying!
I am reaching for you,
I have seen you before.

Can’t you look at me?
Can’t you listen to me?

I am here!
I am talking to you!
I am shouting!
I am screaming!
I am dying…
I have died…

Did you see me?
Did you hear me?
Did you feel me?
Do you remember me?

CottonCandy · CottonCandy on Wed Apr 23, 2008 6:24 am

Hehe... So I'm currently reading Twilight, and... Wow. Press, I could've sworn you wrote it. I'm totally attatched to the book. I've been staying up late reading it... It's too addicting... It just seems like a story Press would've wrote, so I dunno. Just the wording and stuff... It's so similar to all your stories! Especially your vampire one...

I dunno. Maybe I'm just being an idiot.

Dreamer · Dreamer on Thu Apr 24, 2008 2:46 am

i need to ask sg for that book...

Press2000 · Press2000 on Thu Apr 24, 2008 4:36 am

HAHA! I WISH I wrote that! Those books are my favorites. I never really examines the style of writing, so I can't tell. But ya know, haha, thanks for the compliment. Gave me a good laugh.

The stupid MAT tests fried my brain. I wrote two poems when I was done out of boredom. You know what's freaky?

...

....

They...were...HAPPY poems. *shocking!*

CottonCandy · CottonCandy on Fri Apr 25, 2008 2:27 am

lol No problemo! I miss your old avatar. I appreciate it now!! *huggles Edward* He's mine.

Haha... Happy poems are good though, no worries!

Press2000 · Press2000 on Fri Apr 25, 2008 2:53 am

but scary when they come from my mouth....

CottonCandy · CottonCandy on Fri Apr 25, 2008 6:40 am

Scary? Really... I wouldn't think so...

Press2000 · Press2000 on Fri Apr 25, 2008 10:45 pm

heh, you're not emo, that's the thing. K? K. cool. ^_^

CottonCandy · CottonCandy on Tue Apr 29, 2008 3:28 am

What makes you think I'm not emo? Maybe I secretly am... =o

Nah, jk.