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Post  Press2000 on Thu Apr 03, 2008 3:56 am

*pulls out brain notepad* *flips through memories/pages* *cough*

"Girl saves friend from falling off her bike, without even touching friend. Girl has strange dream of falling, and falls into a completely blank place. There's nothing. All withe around her. She almost dies, but a cute guy saves her from falling. Stop your falling word, "stopia". "

That's only the beginning. You should have seen the actual writing of it. Now that I have embarrassed myself, in front of many people, will you write a poem? Please, it would do me much honor. Smile

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Post  Dreamer on Thu Apr 03, 2008 3:59 am

that's funny!!! Very Happy

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Post  Press2000 on Thu Apr 03, 2008 4:02 am

*blushes, but smiles* None of us are really born great. And if you really want to know something worse, my spelling was horrible. This was two years ago as well. Now, I think I'm a TON better. But go on! Try! Please?

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Post  Dreamer on Thu Apr 03, 2008 4:16 am

that's true but i didn't grow up great either....... so you can just amaze us with your fantastic writing skills.

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Post  Press2000 on Thu Apr 03, 2008 4:20 am

*blush* Well I...heh heh, I'm not amazing... Just try, please. Really. Dont make me get on my knees. I dislocated my knee cap, it'll be painful. And my mom will take away my computer cause she will think I'm not exercising the muscles enough. T_T

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Post  Dreamer on Thu Apr 03, 2008 4:24 am

ya you are!! don't pretend you're not!!! ouch, that sucks.

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Post  CottonCandy on Fri Apr 04, 2008 2:56 am

Haha. C'mon. Just try it. I mean, seriously. I actually... might... make one too.... *cough*(short)

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Post  Dreamer on Fri Apr 04, 2008 3:00 am

you should. you're a pretty good writer yourself.

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Post  Angelsmith_3000 on Fri Apr 04, 2008 3:19 am

*jumps in randomly* Hey there! I'll right a poem. *backs away* But only if you post one first!

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Post  CottonCandy on Fri Apr 04, 2008 3:22 am

Writer. Not poeter. Or whatever poet-writer people are called... Poets! That's it! I'm a writer, not a poet.

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Post  CottonCandy on Fri Apr 04, 2008 3:22 am

Eh... Press posted one first!! Your turn!

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Post  Press2000 on Fri Apr 04, 2008 4:56 am

*chuckles* please, dont be scared. Just think about it, at least you're not going to have to actually speak it to someone. Like in class.

Or have barely a month to learn two pieces for a piano recital. >.<

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Post  Shining Darkness on Fri Apr 04, 2008 4:58 am

i have barely a month to memorize like 5 things for a concert. it ends up only being 2 pages though. And ones pretty easy.

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Post  Angelsmith_3000 on Fri Apr 04, 2008 9:52 pm

K! I post one nao!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

“Conflagration Assuaged”

Ambivalence appeared
Anomalies occurred
Thousands were appeased
Arrogance magnified

Wars raged
Deaths deplored
Decorum blighted
Prejudice extolled

Fallow seeded
Torment plotted
People destroyed
Jews decried

Races emulate
Nazis debilitate
Degradation apparent
Depravity ruling

Island bombed
Nations coalesce
People beguiled
Candor revealed

Braggart deceived
Bomb dropped
Nation discombobulated
Conflagration assuaged
Jews extricated

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Post  Angelsmith_3000 on Fri Apr 04, 2008 9:58 pm

What dost thou thinkest?

My writing stinks!!!!!!

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