My first story

This story I wrote when I was seven. By then I wanted to be a writter. By now u don't see many goth writters,but it could be a second job.


It's called A midnight Scare




My name is Lucy. Poeple call me lucky though. Ever since I was little my friends, family, playmates, and teachers all said the same thing .... I'm a freak.

They say it is because I draw things I see. Then, they really happen.

I guess you could say I am weird, you could even call me a freak, but to me my gift is amazing.






(i have to type this up because I wrote w/ paper and pen)


(it'll take 4ever. There are 67 pages handwritten)

Sounds cool!

Why don't you just join the forum?

*pokes* come on.. if you (supposing it really is you the whole time) keep posting.. you should join!

Haha. Yep! You really should.

i THINK he did.. i think he is "gothiclover"

Yep! That's right.

Living Skeleton. wrote:*pokes* come on.. if you (supposing it really is you the whole time) keep posting.. you should join!

I did

(back 2 the story)

"Get over here!"
"nO!" My brother Ean was bugging me.
"Get over here right now!"
"I don't have to listen to u!" He was "watching" me. Errrr. I've always hated it. He bosses me around and makes me do things for him. It's so anooying.
"Yes u do."
"No I don't! Go away!" I slammed the door shut in his face.

I started to laugh becuase I couldn't beilive I actually did that.
"I'm telling mom."
"I don't care."
I sat on my bed and started watching tv.

Living Skeleton. wrote:i THINK he did.. i think he is "gothiclover"

Um.... hate 2 tell ya... but I'm a girl.

so like this is really weird

good story

you didn't have an avatar before, so it was kind of hard to tell...

gothiclover124 wrote:

Living Skeleton. wrote:i THINK he did.. i think he is "gothiclover"

Um.... hate 2 tell ya... but I'm a girl.

so like this is really weird

sorry.. i tend to always say "he" when i'm not sure.

Sorry, now that i know i'll stop.

Dreamer wrote:you didn't have an avatar before, so it was kind of hard to tell...

It's okay.


Now I do so u can tell.

I grabbed the potato chips from my table.

"I hate brothers. He'll get beat up one day for this."

I started to get board so I thought about doing my homework. The thought drifted away as I thought about it.
Before I knew it I was asleep. When I woke up it was 3 am. I walked into the living room and mom was sleeping in her comfy blue chair. Dad wasen't home. He had to work that night.

I turned off the tv in the living room and then walked into the kitchen. On the table was a note for me. It said:

Honey,
I cooked spagetti and meatballs. The leftover is in the fridge.

love you,
mommy.


It's impossible for us to have a family dinner anymore.

Dad is always gone. Mom is always working and I never come out unless it's something I need despreatly. I can say... this family sucks.

I walked back into my room and started doing my homework. I had math and history homework. That took about an hour, but I got it done. I then went into the shower and had a extremly hot shower for the first time in forever.

When I was changing I heard the door open and close. Dad must have been back. I got changed quickly to go see him. He was yelling. It wasen't at me though... it was at my brother.

"Leave ur sister alone. She's old enough to do things herself." I picked his hand up and smacked him.

He kept hitting him until he noticed I was watching.

(sorry i'm so slow. I only get my lunch time to type)

Yay! I like it! Yeah, sorry... I think I might've called you "he" too... I tend to do the same thing as Skeleton. The username was sort of unisex, so I wasn't sure either. Don't tell anyone, but I assumed Angelsmith was a girl until I looked at his profile... Haha... His avatar used to be a fairy.