My first story

CottonCandy wrote:Yay! I like it! Yeah, sorry... I think I might've called you "he" too... I tend to do the same thing as Skeleton. The username was sort of unisex, so I wasn't sure either. Don't tell anyone, but I assumed Angelsmith was a girl until I looked at his profile... Haha... His avatar used to be a fairy.

That's funny
*laughs*

I ran into my room and slammed the door.
I started to cry imaging the pain of my father's large hand strikeing me. I hid in the blanket.
He walked in. He tried to talk to me but I hit him.

"Don't you dare hit me! How could you do that to him!? I hate you!"
"He doesn't care about you like me."
"He cares a lot more than you. Next month you'll be gone for the entire month and when you come back... u'd wish u were at work. I know dad! This stuff happens every other month. You haven't cared. So he may be anoyying, but at least he cares and comes home to watch me! You... you just see me... you don't care... you don't know... your a monster!" I walked outside. It was lightish.

Dad ran after me.
"Get back here."
"Never! I hate you. Why don't you go sleep with the ho?! I know about her." Dad stayed still.
"If you tell your mother i'll kill you."
"Go ahead. Hell would be better than here."

My dad walked away. I sat down on a rock in the creek next to our house. Ean walked out.
He always came here if I wasen't in the house and I was mad.
"I'm sorry Ean."
"No. Don't be. If he didn't do it to me then he'd do it to you or mom."
"I know. And that's the problem... Ean.... Dad seeing another women behind mom's back, and well... dad threatened me not to tell mom. I know u get annoying but I had to tell you or someone else. I'm scared... for you... mom. I could care less about me."
"Hey." He looked at me.
"We'll get through this okay." He kissed my forehead.
"I'd like to think that but I know it's impossible. Mom will die if we told her."
"Then we won't tell her.... we'lll tell the police. You can tell them about how he threathened you and I could tell them about him beating me."
"Okay." Ean got up. He put his hand out to help me up.
"Want an egg mcmuffin?" I ran inside.
The rest of the morning was great.... but then when I got to school.... something horrible happened.

Oh wow... This is very... Scary! I'd hate it if my dad was like that!

man that would really suck to have a dad like that....

uh-huh.

CottonCandy wrote:Oh wow... This is very... Scary! I'd hate it if my dad was like that!

(I know. It's my story though)

Dreamer wrote:man that would really suck to have a dad like that....

)My legal dad was that way with me... only I was like the big bro. But now he's gone.: )

gothiclover124 wrote:

Dreamer wrote:man that would really suck to have a dad like that....

)My legal dad was that way with me... only I was like the big bro. But now he's gone.: )

Oh my gosh! ... That's just.......... Wow... I'm so sorry!

yes... it is scary!

CottonCandy wrote:

gothiclover124 wrote:

Dreamer wrote:man that would really suck to have a dad like that....

)My legal dad was that way with me... only I was like the big bro. But now he's gone.: )

Oh my gosh! ... That's just.......... Wow... I'm so sorry!

(Don't be.
He has made me tougher now by that)

(back to the story)

The cops were waiting for me. I looked at them before they noticed me. I ran down another hall.

I ran into Jake. He was the cutest boy in the whole school.
"I'm so sorry Jake."
"It's okay Lucy."
"Did I ruin something" I looked ashamed.
"No. I'm fine. Don't look ashamed." He picked my chin up sweetly. He smiled at me and I smiled back. I started to blush.
"I'm really sorry though. I'm a total cluts." He laughed.
"I wish you would talk to me more often. I've always wanted the smartest kid in the school to be my friend."
"Okay." He walked away looking at me while he walked.
"Saturday I'm having a party. If you come that'd be great." I could feel my heart pounding. When I turned around my principle was behind me.
"Hi..."
"Come with me." My smile turned to a frown.
"You do understand that if my mom finds out I'll be the one to pay?"
"No. He won't touch you... Listen. I have some very upsetting news to tell you... your brother was talking to your dad and... well... he's dead now. Your father killed him."
"What?! No!!!!!!" I fell to my knees crying. The principle tried getting me up, but I didn't. I heard my heart start to crack.
Mom came an hour later. I was sitting in the office. I was calm but I starred into the wall. When she came in, she ran in crying. When she hugged me, I too was crying.
"I hate dad!"
"I'm sorry sweety. You two should have told me. He should of put the beatting on me and not your brother."
I cried for hours. For two days I didn't go to school. I just sat and cried as I starred into my room wall. It was like the world wanted me to cry. I tried hard not to think of the memories, but all the memeories came back.
Jake got my phone number some how and called me.
"Are you okay?"
"No I'm not. I can't pretend to be okay Ither."
"I cancelled my party. I wanna take you out so you can be at least happy enough to go to school."
"That's sweet but you shouldn't of. I'm sorry I'm this way. It's hard." I started to cry.
"Don't cry. Hey where do you live? I'll come over." I told him my address. A little while later he got there. I hugged him for an hour. I cried at the same time.
"Shhhhhhh. It's okay."

gothiclover124 wrote:

Dreamer wrote:man that would really suck to have a dad like that....

)My legal dad was that way with me... only I was like the big bro. But now he's gone.: )

well its good he is away i think but good story

DAM* GOOD STORY did it realy happen though

good story, yah.