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The Protector of Earth (Updated 2/22)

Post  hero traveler on Thu Feb 21, 2008 12:28 pm

Prologue

One million years ago wolves were the
protectors of Earth. It was very peaceful…
until a great evil fell apon the wolves. A
wolf named Slash was tired of this peacefulness,
so he created an army and killed most of the other
wolves. The remaining wolves hid and learned how
to turn into humans. They lived with the humans for
a long time.

They were happy with the humans, but soon they
started to get old. They turned back into wolves
so they would live longer. Now they bite humans so
the human can be the new protectors of Earth. One
day there will be a human that will be a great protector
that will beat and destroy Slash.


(( Tell me what you think. I'll post part of Chapter 1 soon))


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Re: The Protector of Earth (Updated 2/22)

Post  guest on Thu Feb 21, 2008 12:33 pm

that looks good Very Happy

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Post  CottonCandy on Thu Feb 21, 2008 12:35 pm

Wow! I really like it! I want to know what happens next... I like your avatar by the way Wink
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Post  Admin on Thu Feb 21, 2008 10:42 pm

OOO!!!

A story!!!

This sounds promising!!!
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Re: The Protector of Earth (Updated 2/22)

Post  hero traveler on Sat Feb 23, 2008 12:55 pm

(Thanks everyone! update! Very Happy )

Chapter 1



I awoke by the sound of a wolf howling to the moon.
I sat up. Everyone in the tent was asleep. The tent has
two windows and a door. They were all zipped up. Inside the tent was my
friends, Tyler Burns and Kevin Steavens. Tyler has long blonde
hair that almost covered his brown eyes. Kevin has short black hair and brown eyes.

It was the last week of summer. That meant that I had one week
left before school starts again. I begged my mom for us to go
camping. I asked her at least twenty times before she said yes.
This year I will be in 7th grade.

I looked at my watch . It was 11:50pm. I grabbed my flashlight from
my backpack. Since I couldn’t sleep I decided to look around camp. I
tip toed to the door, unzipped it, and walked outside.


As I walked outside the air felt cold. I grabbed my shoes that were
next to the door. Once I put them on I turned on my flashlight. I looked
around. There was two tents. One tent for the kids and the other for
my dad. I walked on a trail behind our tent.

As I walked through the trail leaves crumpled under my shoe. It was
so quiet. Suddenly I heard a branch snap. I quickly turned my head
around. Nothing was there. I looked down at my feet. There was no
branch under my feet. ‘It was probably nothing,’ I thought. I kept on
walking. I felt like I was being watched. I turned around again. Once
again nothing was there.
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Post  weirdiswhatilike on Sat Feb 23, 2008 11:57 pm

Ooooo, spooky!!!
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Post  hero traveler on Mon Feb 25, 2008 5:55 am

thanks! any other comments?
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Post  weirdiswhatilike on Mon Feb 25, 2008 6:21 am

Hi hero!!!
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Post  hero traveler on Mon Feb 25, 2008 6:40 am

hi. i should have a update soon. Very Happy and if get a chance plz join my forum.
http://hideout.forumotion.com/index.htm
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Post  weirdiswhatilike on Mon Feb 25, 2008 6:46 am

coolio!!!

im so bored!!!
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Post  hero traveler on Mon Feb 25, 2008 6:58 am

update!

"Tyler? Kevin? Is that you?" I asked

There was no reply. I shrugged and kept on walking.
Suddenly I heard a low growl behind me. I stopped in
my tracks and turned around. Behind me was a wolf.
It had fur that was white as snow and it’s eyes was emerald green.

I took a step back. It took a step forward.


“ Good wolf. Don’t hurt me,” I said.


I started to tremble. The wolf took another step forward.
It was still growling at me. I took another step back. My
back hit a tree. Now the wolf was tree steps away from me.
I stared at it’s eyes. It’s eyes showed sadness.


“Stay,” I said.


I dashed past the wolf. I looked back. The wolf was gaining on me. Suddenly I tripped. I put my arms over my face before I fell.
I rolled onto my back. The world pounced on top of me. It
opened it’s mouth. It had very sharp white teeth. The it bit my side.
I yelled out in pain and the wolf ran away.


I grabbed my side and looked at it. It wasn’t a pretty site.
Some of my flesh was missing and there was lots of blood.

“ Help!” I yelled.


There was no reply. I’m going to die, I thought.


“ Dad,” I whispered.


My voice was slipping away. I coughed up blood. My eyes sight was getting blurrier. Suddenly I heard a noise. A light shined in my eyes. I closed them.

“ Oh my god!” a voice exclaimed, “ Guys over here! I found him!”

I wondered who it was. I heard footsteps
coming closer. A hand removed my hands from my wound.

“ Matthew, open your eyes,” said another voice.

I did as I was told. Standing around me was Tyler, Kevin,
and my dad. Theu all had a worried expression on their face.

“ I thought you were dead!” Tyler said.

“ So did I,” Kevin said.


I smiled……then I blacked out.


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Post  CottonCandy on Tue Feb 26, 2008 9:56 am

Oh man... This is getting awesome! Keep writing!
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Post  weirdiswhatilike on Tue Feb 26, 2008 11:15 am

Oh!!!

Come on post more!!!
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Post  hero traveler on Tue Feb 26, 2008 11:52 am

I will soon. MAYBE tomorow
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Re: The Protector of Earth (Updated 2/22)

Post  Angel of darkness on Wed Mar 26, 2008 6:59 am

bump
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Post  CottonCandy on Tue Apr 01, 2008 10:33 am

Bumpity bump bump!
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Post  Shining Darkness on Wed Apr 02, 2008 9:01 am

CottonCandy wrote:Bumpity bump bump!

I think it's supposed to be bump bumpity bump.

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Post  CottonCandy on Tue Apr 08, 2008 10:42 am

No! It's bumpity bump bump!!

Haha. I almost wrote it your way since it was the last one I read.
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Post  Shining Darkness on Tue Apr 08, 2008 11:47 am

maybe we both wrong and it's bump bump bumpity... pale affraid

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Post  CottonCandy on Wed Apr 09, 2008 7:44 am

Nah. That one sounds retarded.
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Post  Shining Darkness on Wed Apr 09, 2008 9:03 am

we agree on one thing on that matter then.

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Post  CottonCandy on Wed Apr 09, 2008 10:32 am

Yay!

We disagree a lot. lol.
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Post  Shining Darkness on Wed Apr 09, 2008 11:13 am

we disagree alot but we are similar.. odd huh?

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Post  CottonCandy on Wed Apr 09, 2008 11:21 am

Yeah... oddity.
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Post  Shining Darkness on Wed Apr 09, 2008 11:24 am

yep.

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