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Post  Clumbsylittlegirl on Thu May 01, 2008 9:04 pm

CottonCandy wrote:
gothiclover124 wrote:
Dreamer wrote:man that would really suck to have a dad like that....

)My legal dad was that way with me... only I was like the big bro. But now he's gone.: )

Oh my gosh! ... That's just.......... Wow... I'm so sorry!

(Don't be.
He has made me tougher now by that)
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Post  Clumbsylittlegirl on Thu May 01, 2008 9:20 pm

(back to the story)

The cops were waiting for me. I looked at them before they noticed me. I ran down another hall.

I ran into Jake. He was the cutest boy in the whole school.
"I'm so sorry Jake."
"It's okay Lucy."
"Did I ruin something" I looked ashamed.
"No. I'm fine. Don't look ashamed." He picked my chin up sweetly. He smiled at me and I smiled back. I started to blush.
"I'm really sorry though. I'm a total cluts." He laughed.
"I wish you would talk to me more often. I've always wanted the smartest kid in the school to be my friend."
"Okay." He walked away looking at me while he walked.
"Saturday I'm having a party. If you come that'd be great." I could feel my heart pounding. When I turned around my principle was behind me.
"Hi..."
"Come with me." My smile turned to a frown.
"You do understand that if my mom finds out I'll be the one to pay?"
"No. He won't touch you... Listen. I have some very upsetting news to tell you... your brother was talking to your dad and... well... he's dead now. Your father killed him."
"What?! No!!!!!!" I fell to my knees crying. The principle tried getting me up, but I didn't. I heard my heart start to crack.
Mom came an hour later. I was sitting in the office. I was calm but I starred into the wall. When she came in, she ran in crying. When she hugged me, I too was crying.
"I hate dad!"
"I'm sorry sweety. You two should have told me. He should of put the beatting on me and not your brother."
I cried for hours. For two days I didn't go to school. I just sat and cried as I starred into my room wall. It was like the world wanted me to cry. I tried hard not to think of the memories, but all the memeories came back.
Jake got my phone number some how and called me.
"Are you okay?"
"No I'm not. I can't pretend to be okay Ither."
"I cancelled my party. I wanna take you out so you can be at least happy enough to go to school."
"That's sweet but you shouldn't of. I'm sorry I'm this way. It's hard." I started to cry.
"Don't cry. Hey where do you live? I'll come over." I told him my address. A little while later he got there. I hugged him for an hour. I cried at the same time.
"Shhhhhhh. It's okay."
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Post  Cleston on Sun May 04, 2008 12:11 am

gothiclover124 wrote:
Dreamer wrote:man that would really suck to have a dad like that....

)My legal dad was that way with me... only I was like the big bro. But now he's gone.: )
well its good he is away i think but good story
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Post  Cleston on Sun May 04, 2008 12:13 am

DAM* GOOD STORY did it realy happen though
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Post  Shining Darkness on Sun May 04, 2008 3:50 am

good story, yah.

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Post  Clumbsylittlegirl on Mon May 05, 2008 9:10 pm

Cleston wrote:
gothiclover124 wrote:
Dreamer wrote:man that would really suck to have a dad like that....

)My legal dad was that way with me... only I was like the big bro. But now he's gone.: )
well its good he is away i think but good story


thanks Smile
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Post  Clumbsylittlegirl on Mon May 05, 2008 9:11 pm

Cleston wrote:DAM* GOOD STORY did it realy happen though

to me?

I'm not dead am I?
I was just beaten and close to death... but then m mom found out and he went bye bye
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Post  Clumbsylittlegirl on Mon May 05, 2008 9:16 pm

*Back 2 the story, not me*

The next couple of days I didn't go to school. When I went to school everybody starred at me. Even the populars talked to me.
"I'm really sorry about your brother."
"Don't be. Now the beatting has stopped." I wanted to scream " be sorry. he's not here to protect me and even though he makes me mad I loved him". You never really realise how good you have it until it goes away. Walking around made me feel cold and dark inside.
Part of me misses him and makes me want to die. But then the other part makes me want to live.
(sorry it's so sort. I have 2 work on my blog too. I only have 15 minutes left of this school period)
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Post  Clumbsylittlegirl on Tue May 06, 2008 9:12 pm

*story*

One class period began to seem like five years. It was so slow. I wanted it to end soon.
I walked in the hall at fifth period, my lunch perod, I started to feel dizzey. The world was spinning in circles. Everything was becoming blury. It was so overwhelming I fell down.
A teacher seen me fall and emedeatly ran to me. He kept calling for help. The last thing I remeber was three people all around me telling me "it's gonna be okay. Don't go on us"
When I woke up I was in a hosptial. I heard the beep of the heart moniter. It was a weird beat. My room was all white. A nurse walked in.
"Lucy... are you up?"
"Yeah."
"Are you okay?"
"My head hurts."
"The doctor is gonna be in, in a few minutes, okay?" The nurse left. A few minutes later a doctor came in.
"What did you do to yourself?"
"What's it matter to you?!"
"You've got to tell me. We found a drug in your system that could kill you."
"So it does work."
"Did you try to drug yourself?"
"Yep."
"That's not very..." I stopped him.
"You go through what I'm going through, and you tell me if you like it!" I toke the needle out of my hand. I threw the meal that was on the side table down. The food spilt everywhere.
"Lucy!" People ran in and tried to stop me. By force I stopped. A nurse popped her head in.
"Someone is here to see you." Jake walked in.
"Wow. Nice remodeling of the room."
"Ha ha very funny." I spoke with little happiness. In fact it sounded like I could die right now. I could if he wasen't here.
"So how are you?"
"Just peachy." The doctors and nurses cleaned up the mess. Jake sat down in a chair. He held flowers in his hands.
"I brought you flowers." My saddness had turned to happiness.
"Your soooo sweet." I leaned over and kissed him on the cheek. I stoppped realising what I did.
"I'm sorry." I talked with guilt in my voice.
"Don't be. If I wasen't chicken, then I would have done the same to you a long time ago." I started blushing. I could tell that this was a good beginnging.
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Post  Shining Darkness on Wed May 07, 2008 9:41 am

It's a good story. Keep up the good work!

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Post  Clumbsylittlegirl on Wed May 07, 2008 9:11 pm

When I was released jake took me out to see a movie. We seen some horror movie. I never knew the name, but I sure did like it. If Jake was planning on me being scared and holding on to him the whole time, it didn't work.
When I got home I got this huge lexure about how I'm so smart and how I need to stay alive. Most of me just blocked out everything and remebered parts of the movie and the kiss he gave me when he brought me home.
"Do you hear me young lady?"
"What, Oh yes."
" You can't drug yourself. It's wrong. Unlike you think, people want you in this world. Like jake and your teachers, and me."
"Spare me the lexure. You get really annoying. I won't try it again. Your probably gonna hind all the pills and medicine aren't you?"
"How'd you know?"
"I know mom. Like I also knew that the only reason the movie I seen with Jake was to have me hold him in my arms the whole time. It didn't work, oh and like your getting a promotion in a week, and your getting a bussniess letter saying you have to leave, you'll worry and won't want to go, but I'll convince you."
"Wow."
"All you can say is wow?!"
"Your lucky, lucy."
"No. I'm not. I could have seen that Eon was gonna die and I could have stopped it, but I didn't and now he's gone!" I walked away hopeing my mother wouldn't follow.
"Lucy don't blame yourself." I shut my door. I jumped on my bed and stated listening to my cd player. I wanted the whole world to crash and burn, and all that's left is me and Jake. We could be like adam and eve.
I heard a tapping on my window. I got up and looked outside. It was Patrick. He was a kid I went to school with. I opened my window.
"What are you doing?"
"Wanna hang out?"
"Patrick I'm tired and I just yelled at my mother, which was alfull."
"We can get a coffie and talk."
"Okay." I locked my door. I grabbed my coat and climbed out the window.
"We've got to be quiet."
"Okay." We walked away quiet as a mouse.
The coffie shop was empty.
"Why is it so empty?"
"My parents own it. I asked them if we could close it so we could talk alone."
"That's nice."
"I know you're going through a rough time, so spill everything out to me. I promise everything you say stays with me."
So I did. I cried once or twice but I pulled myself back togther.
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Post  Clumbsylittlegirl on Wed May 07, 2008 9:12 pm

Living Skeleton. wrote:It's a good story. Keep up the good work!

Thnxs
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Post  Shining Darkness on Thu May 08, 2008 9:59 am

no problemo.

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Post  Clumbsylittlegirl on Thu May 08, 2008 9:15 pm

(story)
When I got done telling him everything I hugged him for what seemed like hours but was only half an hour.
"Lucy I'm here for you."
"Thanks." I wipped my eye trying to cover the tear coming out. "I'm sorry my life seems so dramatic and I'm just telling you everything and pouring it all on you."
"Don't be. Friends are that way. I'm your friend. I'll alwways be. Even if you can see 50% of the future."
"Your awsome." I smiled.
"No. I'm only friendly."
"Well eather way I'm happy."
"I'm happy for you and Jake."
"We aren't officially dating. I just kissed him twice and went to the movies with him."
"So. It's the start to something. Trust me. Jake is not the type of guy that only wants you in his bed."
"That's the thing though. 99% of guys only want you in their bed, not in their heart."
"Well me and Jake are in the 1% range."
"That's good." I smiled and drank some more of my coffie.
We walked back to my house. I climbed in the window and said our goodbyes. I unlocked my door.
i walked into the living room.
"Where have you been?"
"I was in my room."
"No. I watched you leave the house with another man. Are you sleeping with him?" Mom seemed so very calm.
"No. He's a friend from school. We went out for coffie and talked. He let me tell him everything."
"You can tell me everything."
"No I can't. 50% of the time you get mad and the other 50% you blurt out to everyone. He has never told anyone else one of my secrets."
"I care about you."
"If you cared you wouldn't tell or be mad." It was dead quiet.
"Your brother's funeral is tommorow. Are you going to school?"
"I'm gonna try."
"If you need to stay home go ahead."
"Mom I know you care, but I need to get over this or else I'll never go to school and I'll never move out.." She stopped me.
"You wanna move out?"
"Yes. When I'm older I have to." I could see my mom start to cry.
"Mom don't cry."
"I'm trying not to." The tears came out.
"Mom. If I wanna help you when your grey and old I have to get a job, and work, and raise a family."
"You could stay here."
"Mom it won't be for four years or so."
"Four years that could pass by."
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Post  Clumbsylittlegirl on Fri May 09, 2008 9:07 pm

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For a while the house was really quiet. The thing that broke the silence was the knock on the door. Mom was asleep so i answered the door.
"Hello?" I rubbed my eyes.
"Is Lucy here?"
"This is her."
"Good." It was jake's x.
"What do you want?"
"To kill you." She pulled out a knife.
"Can't you do that when it's not three in the morning?!"
"No. I was actuallly gonna hide your body."
"Oh. Well continue." She brought the knife closer to me. I took a step back. I slammed the door in her face.
"Goodbye."

(this one is short due to an ass teacher bugging me)
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Post  Cleston on Sun May 11, 2008 1:49 am

wow scary
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Post  Shining Darkness on Sun May 11, 2008 11:15 am

ok... Why do you go here during school?

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Post  Clumbsylittlegirl on Mon May 12, 2008 9:15 pm

Living Skeleton. wrote:ok... Why do you go here during school?

I broke my computer while smashing my brothers head on the moniter. Man that was fun.
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Post  Dreamer on Thu May 15, 2008 8:41 am

awesome! i wish i had the guts to do that, but my parents would kill me
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Post  Shining Darkness on Thu May 15, 2008 8:52 am

i wouldn't do that..

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Post  Dreamer on Fri May 16, 2008 8:33 am

i don't like my brother...
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Post  Shining Darkness on Fri May 16, 2008 8:50 am

oh. Not that many people like their siblings much it seems.

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Post  Clumbsylittlegirl on Fri May 16, 2008 9:05 pm

Dreamer wrote:i don't like my brother...

I have four sisters(younger than i)
two brothers(younger than i)
and my sisters r half sisters and one brother is half and one is brother by marrage
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Post  Clumbsylittlegirl on Fri May 16, 2008 9:05 pm

Living Skeleton. wrote:oh. Not that many people like their siblings much it seems.

oh soooooooo true. I hate all mine. Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad
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Post  Shining Darkness on Sat May 17, 2008 8:32 am

Heh... No comment on mine.

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