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Post  gothiclo on Tue Apr 08, 2008 10:45 pm

This story I wrote when I was seven. By then I wanted to be a writter. By now u don't see many goth writters,but it could be a second job.


It's called A midnight Scare




My name is Lucy. Poeple call me lucky though. Ever since I was little my friends, family, playmates, and teachers all said the same thing .... I'm a freak.

They say it is because I draw things I see. Then, they really happen.

I guess you could say I am weird, you could even call me a freak, but to me my gift is amazing.






(i have to type this up because I wrote w/ paper and pen)


(it'll take 4ever. There are 67 pages handwritten)

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Post  CottonCandy on Wed Apr 09, 2008 7:43 am

Sounds cool!

Why don't you just join the forum?
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Post  Shining Darkness on Wed Apr 09, 2008 9:05 am

*pokes* come on.. if you (supposing it really is you the whole time) keep posting.. you should join!

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Post  CottonCandy on Wed Apr 09, 2008 10:31 am

Haha. Yep! You really should.
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Post  Shining Darkness on Sun Apr 13, 2008 5:54 am

i THINK he did.. i think he is "gothiclover"

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Post  CottonCandy on Mon Apr 14, 2008 6:43 am

Yep! That's right.
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Post  Clumbsylittlegirl on Mon Apr 21, 2008 9:07 pm

Living Skeleton. wrote:*pokes* come on.. if you (supposing it really is you the whole time) keep posting.. you should join!

I did
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Post  Clumbsylittlegirl on Mon Apr 21, 2008 9:18 pm

(back 2 the story)

"Get over here!"
"nO!" My brother Ean was bugging me.
"Get over here right now!"
"I don't have to listen to u!" He was "watching" me. Errrr. I've always hated it. He bosses me around and makes me do things for him. It's so anooying.
"Yes u do."
"No I don't! Go away!" I slammed the door shut in his face.

I started to laugh becuase I couldn't beilive I actually did that.
"I'm telling mom."
"I don't care."
I sat on my bed and started watching tv.
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Post  Clumbsylittlegirl on Mon Apr 21, 2008 9:20 pm

Living Skeleton. wrote:i THINK he did.. i think he is "gothiclover"

Um.... hate 2 tell ya... but I'm a girl.

so like this is really weird
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Post  Cleston on Tue Apr 22, 2008 6:17 am

good story
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Post  Dreamer on Tue Apr 22, 2008 8:03 am

you didn't have an avatar before, so it was kind of hard to tell...
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Post  Shining Darkness on Tue Apr 22, 2008 8:39 am

gothiclover124 wrote:
Living Skeleton. wrote:i THINK he did.. i think he is "gothiclover"

Um.... hate 2 tell ya... but I'm a girl.

so like this is really weird

sorry.. i tend to always say "he" when i'm not sure.

Sorry, now that i know i'll stop.

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Post  Clumbsylittlegirl on Tue Apr 22, 2008 10:40 pm

Dreamer wrote:you didn't have an avatar before, so it was kind of hard to tell...

It's okay.


Now I do so u can tell.
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Post  Clumbsylittlegirl on Tue Apr 22, 2008 10:53 pm

I grabbed the potato chips from my table.

"I hate brothers. He'll get beat up one day for this."

I started to get board so I thought about doing my homework. The thought drifted away as I thought about it.
Before I knew it I was asleep. When I woke up it was 3 am. I walked into the living room and mom was sleeping in her comfy blue chair. Dad wasen't home. He had to work that night.

I turned off the tv in the living room and then walked into the kitchen. On the table was a note for me. It said:

Honey,
I cooked spagetti and meatballs. The leftover is in the fridge.

love you,
mommy.


It's impossible for us to have a family dinner anymore.

Dad is always gone. Mom is always working and I never come out unless it's something I need despreatly. I can say... this family sucks.

I walked back into my room and started doing my homework. I had math and history homework. That took about an hour, but I got it done. I then went into the shower and had a extremly hot shower for the first time in forever.

When I was changing I heard the door open and close. Dad must have been back. I got changed quickly to go see him. He was yelling. It wasen't at me though... it was at my brother.

"Leave ur sister alone. She's old enough to do things herself." I picked his hand up and smacked him.

He kept hitting him until he noticed I was watching.

(sorry i'm so slow. I only get my lunch time to type)
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Post  CottonCandy on Wed Apr 23, 2008 11:29 am

Yay! I like it! Yeah, sorry... I think I might've called you "he" too... I tend to do the same thing as Skeleton. The username was sort of unisex, so I wasn't sure either. Don't tell anyone, but I assumed Angelsmith was a girl until I looked at his profile... Haha... His avatar used to be a fairy.
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Post  Clumbsylittlegirl on Wed Apr 23, 2008 10:28 pm

CottonCandy wrote:Yay! I like it! Yeah, sorry... I think I might've called you "he" too... I tend to do the same thing as Skeleton. The username was sort of unisex, so I wasn't sure either. Don't tell anyone, but I assumed Angelsmith was a girl until I looked at his profile... Haha... His avatar used to be a fairy.


That's funny
*laughs*
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Post  Clumbsylittlegirl on Fri Apr 25, 2008 9:05 pm

I ran into my room and slammed the door.
I started to cry imaging the pain of my father's large hand strikeing me. I hid in the blanket.
He walked in. He tried to talk to me but I hit him.

"Don't you dare hit me! How could you do that to him!? I hate you!"
"He doesn't care about you like me."
"He cares a lot more than you. Next month you'll be gone for the entire month and when you come back... u'd wish u were at work. I know dad! This stuff happens every other month. You haven't cared. So he may be anoyying, but at least he cares and comes home to watch me! You... you just see me... you don't care... you don't know... your a monster!" I walked outside. It was lightish.

Dad ran after me.
"Get back here."
"Never! I hate you. Why don't you go sleep with the ho?! I know about her." Dad stayed still.
"If you tell your mother i'll kill you."
"Go ahead. Hell would be better than here."
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Post  Clumbsylittlegirl on Fri Apr 25, 2008 9:12 pm

My dad walked away. I sat down on a rock in the creek next to our house. Ean walked out.
He always came here if I wasen't in the house and I was mad.
"I'm sorry Ean."
"No. Don't be. If he didn't do it to me then he'd do it to you or mom."
"I know. And that's the problem... Ean.... Dad seeing another women behind mom's back, and well... dad threatened me not to tell mom. I know u get annoying but I had to tell you or someone else. I'm scared... for you... mom. I could care less about me."
"Hey." He looked at me.
"We'll get through this okay." He kissed my forehead.
"I'd like to think that but I know it's impossible. Mom will die if we told her."
"Then we won't tell her.... we'lll tell the police. You can tell them about how he threathened you and I could tell them about him beating me."
"Okay." Ean got up. He put his hand out to help me up.
"Want an egg mcmuffin?" I ran inside.
The rest of the morning was great.... but then when I got to school.... something horrible happened.
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Post  CottonCandy on Tue Apr 29, 2008 8:26 am

Oh wow... This is very... Scary! I'd hate it if my dad was like that!
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Post  Dreamer on Tue Apr 29, 2008 9:28 am

man that would really suck to have a dad like that....
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Post  Shining Darkness on Tue Apr 29, 2008 9:30 am

uh-huh.

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Post  Clumbsylittlegirl on Wed Apr 30, 2008 3:52 am

CottonCandy wrote:Oh wow... This is very... Scary! I'd hate it if my dad was like that!

(I know. It's my story though)
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Post  Clumbsylittlegirl on Wed Apr 30, 2008 3:53 am

Dreamer wrote:man that would really suck to have a dad like that....

)My legal dad was that way with me... only I was like the big bro. But now he's gone.: )
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Post  CottonCandy on Thu May 01, 2008 9:05 am

gothiclover124 wrote:
Dreamer wrote:man that would really suck to have a dad like that....

)My legal dad was that way with me... only I was like the big bro. But now he's gone.: )

Oh my gosh! ... That's just.......... Wow... I'm so sorry!
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Post  Shining Darkness on Thu May 01, 2008 9:06 am

yes... it is scary!

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