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Post  Cleston on Tue Apr 22, 2008 6:33 am

one extra isnt too bad is it????? Very Happy
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Post  CottonCandy on Tue Apr 22, 2008 6:45 am

I guess not! So... Are we doing this in third or third person? In all the roleplays I've done have done it in third person, sort of like you would tell a story... With quotes and such. But, I don't know....
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Post  Cleston on Tue Apr 22, 2008 6:49 am

huh
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Post  Shining Darkness on Tue Apr 22, 2008 8:28 am

CottonCandy wrote:I guess not! So... Are we doing this in third or third person? In all the roleplays I've done have done it in third person, sort of like you would tell a story... With quotes and such. But, I don't know....
first or third.

first is saying like.... "I ran to the house"
third is "Bob ran into the brick wall"

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Post  Clumbsylittlegirl on Tue Apr 22, 2008 10:34 pm

Cleston wrote:one extra isnt too bad is it????? Very Happy

no
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Post  Clumbsylittlegirl on Tue Apr 22, 2008 10:36 pm

*walks over to my house and sits on the porch.*

it'd be awsome if we went in their.

I wonder if the gang would wanna go?

*drinks a coke.*

yuck! it's flat
*throws soda on the ground*
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Post  Clumbsylittlegirl on Tue Apr 22, 2008 10:38 pm

CottonCandy wrote:I guess not! So... Are we doing this in third or third person? In all the roleplays I've done have done it in third person, sort of like you would tell a story... With quotes and such. But, I don't know....

I'm not the quating fan. so do it as if ur the person doing it...

like:

I walked over to the chair.

Stuff like that
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Post  CottonCandy on Wed Apr 23, 2008 10:51 am

Living Skeleton. wrote:
CottonCandy wrote:I guess not! So... Are we doing this in third or third person? In all the roleplays I've done have done it in third person, sort of like you would tell a story... With quotes and such. But, I don't know....
first or third.

first is saying like.... "I ran to the house"
third is "Bob ran into the brick wall"

Haha oops. Sorry. I meant First or Third.
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Post  CottonCandy on Wed Apr 23, 2008 11:06 am

((So... In first person? I'll make an extreme attempt. I've never done
it like this before... We should use an Out of Character form though,
correct? e.g.
putting things that are not part of the story in parentheses and such?))

I looked in the mirror at myself, wondering what to do with it. It was
in a loose ponytail, just to get it out of my face for a while. I
glanced at the clock. It read 7:30. I was going to be late meeting with
my friends. I took out the ponytail and let my hair fall over my
shoulders and onto my back. I carefully parted my hair, and pushed hair
over my shoulders of either side. I made sure the part was perfectly
straight, else I wouldn't be satisfied. Once I knew it was exact, I
grabbed two green ribbons out of my collection. I slowly tied one
ribbon over each of the sides of hair, making low pigtails. I smiled in
the mirror, happy that (once again), it looked great. I grabbed my bag
and hurried down the stairs. I ran out of the door to my house, all the
way down the street. I spotted one of my friends, Arya. "Arya!" I shouted. I sprinted towards her. I grinned, hoping she wouldn't care or notice of me being late. I looked up toward the big mansion in front of us. "Geez... That place is huge. Isn't it said to be haunted or something?" I asked, shuddering. It wasn't my fault I wasn't the courageous one. I hated scary places. Somehow, I always get wounded up in doing something I don't want to. I figured this was going to happen today. I sighed, helpless.
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Post  Clumbsylittlegirl on Wed Apr 23, 2008 10:26 pm

It's first person.


I've been trying to send it but it hasen't been working
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Post  Press2000 on Thu Apr 24, 2008 9:31 am

Elizabeth scanned herself in the mirror once. Jeans, sneakers, hoodie, bun. Check. Everything in order. She casually strutted out of the house, dragging her feet lightly making scarping sounds along the sidewalk.

scccr scccr scccr scccr

Soon, she reached the corner and waited with the others, not saying much of anything. when everyone had gathered, Elizabeth walked the farthest behind in the group as they went to the dark, old, tumbling mansion. Someone asked about it being haunted.

"Hmm, most likely not. Maybe cobwebs and stuff, but I highly doubt there's ghosts, goblins, witches or anything..." Elizabeth commented, off-handedly, not quite paying attention to her words as they rolled off her tongue.
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Post  CottonCandy on Fri Apr 25, 2008 1:11 am

((I do it the same way as Press. It's really difficult to do in first person...))
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Post  Clumbsylittlegirl on Fri Apr 25, 2008 8:59 pm

*I laughed*

Last time anyone went in there they came out cyco.

*stopped laughing and thought*

lets go in!
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Post  Shining Darkness on Sun Apr 27, 2008 10:04 am

((when do we start, or have we already??))

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Post  Clumbsylittlegirl on Mon Apr 28, 2008 10:28 pm

Living Skeleton. wrote:((when do we start, or have we already??))
(We already started)
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Post  Press2000 on Tue Apr 29, 2008 3:58 am

Living Skeleton. wrote:((when do we start, or have we already??))
((DUH!!! haha. ))
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Post  CottonCandy on Tue Apr 29, 2008 8:12 am

((Haha... We're waiting on you, Skelly!)
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Post  Shining Darkness on Tue Apr 29, 2008 8:34 am

*thinks* Hmm..... Wonder why? Let's go find out!

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Post  Shining Darkness on Tue Apr 29, 2008 8:40 am

Press2000 wrote:Elizabeth scanned herself in the mirror once. Jeans, sneakers, hoodie, bun. Check. Everything in order. She casually strutted out of the house, dragging her feet lightly making scarping sounds along the sidewalk.

scccr scccr scccr scccr

Soon, she reached the corner and waited with the others, not saying much of anything. when everyone had gathered, Elizabeth walked the farthest behind in the group as they went to the dark, old, tumbling mansion. Someone asked about it being haunted.

"Hmm, most likely not. Maybe cobwebs and stuff, but I highly doubt there's ghosts, goblins, witches or anything..." Elizabeth commented, off-handedly, not quite paying attention to her words as they rolled off her tongue.


((First person goth said.))

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Post  CottonCandy on Tue Apr 29, 2008 11:03 am

Living Skeleton. wrote:
Press2000 wrote:Elizabeth scanned herself in the mirror once. Jeans, sneakers, hoodie, bun. Check. Everything in order. She casually strutted out of the house, dragging her feet lightly making scarping sounds along the sidewalk.

scccr scccr scccr scccr

Soon, she reached the corner and waited with the others, not saying much of anything. when everyone had gathered, Elizabeth walked the farthest behind in the group as they went to the dark, old, tumbling mansion. Someone asked about it being haunted.

"Hmm, most likely not. Maybe cobwebs and stuff, but I highly doubt there's ghosts, goblins, witches or anything..." Elizabeth commented, off-handedly, not quite paying attention to her words as they rolled off her tongue.


((First person goth said.))

=P You're so mean. I attempted at it, and it's difficult!
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Post  Shining Darkness on Tue Apr 29, 2008 11:14 am

ok, sorry.. i guess we can do it both ways then.

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Post  CottonCandy on Tue Apr 29, 2008 11:43 am

It's okay! I just don't know if I will be able to do first person. I'll make an attempt so I can follow the rules though.
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Post  Clumbsylittlegirl on Wed Apr 30, 2008 3:51 am

you can't catch me
*runs insides. Trips on something in the dark.*

hey u guys should come here
*something grabbs my hand*
ha! must be a snake.
*reaches out and feels the thing. it's a cold hand*
Ha! This is really funny!
*starts getting pulled further in. stops acting so happy but still is a little and a little scared*
you guys wanna come in now... hurry
*frowns as being dragged*
weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! Help me!*screams at the top of my lungs*
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Post  Shining Darkness on Wed Apr 30, 2008 8:32 am

Gosh... too dark in here! *makes a fire* Hmm.. a bit better. *Looks around* There! *runs after Arya* Whoa.. a zombie! *panics and runs back to others*

Yikes... come on, we have to help her. You all go first!

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Post  CottonCandy on Wed Apr 30, 2008 9:28 am

"Um..." I said, shuffling my feet. Once I heard the echos of Arya's scream, my eyes widened with fear. At first I thought it was some sort of prank, but I freaked out when I realized that Arya just might not be kidding. I squeezed my eyes shut, and ran into the dark and mysterious building. My courage quickly extinguished when I realized that the house was completely pitch black. I couldn't see anything. Whatsoever. I tugged at my pigtails in frustration. I started getting dizzy. I couldn't take being in the dark. I fell to the ground, closing my eyes, trying to imagine a fire... Warmth, light...
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