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Post  Shining Darkness on Thu Mar 06, 2008 11:41 am

This is like Press2000's easter poetry contest, but she wanted to be able to post in one (unbiased), so same rules. And thus, if you want to put more than one in the contest, use this one for a second poem.
K?

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Post  Press2000 on Fri Mar 07, 2008 11:58 am

Why?


It's so hard to know,
What I do.
And to carry on,
With the life I do.
And it always seems,
Like your eyes see right through,
Into my core, center of my soul.
And hurt me,
Kill me,
With words I can not face.
And leave me with no choice,
But the silence been chosen.
Does it give you pleasure,
To call me names?
And to show your hate?
And then come up,
And lie to my face?
Does it make you smile,
To see me in pain,
Watching the days go by
In the silence I chose?
What had I ever done,
But be myself
And carry a smile?
And you hated me,
Because I was born this way.
Does it make you feel strong,
To bring me down?
To watch me bleed
On this silent ground?
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Post  Shining Darkness on Fri Mar 07, 2008 2:42 pm

Hmm.. So far, you're poem is winning Press2000.


Big suprise huh? *puts down sarcasm smily*

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Post  Press2000 on Sun Mar 09, 2008 9:10 am

Well it's hard not to be winning when you're the only one that's entered.






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Post  Shining Darkness on Sun Mar 09, 2008 10:42 am

That was the point.

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Post  Press2000 on Sun Mar 09, 2008 10:52 am

oh.
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Post  Press2000 on Thu Mar 13, 2008 7:13 am

All Our Days

I've never seen,
A sweeter smile.
I've never felt,
A greater feeling.

I've never been loved,
The way you love me.
I've never loved anyone,
The way I love you.

I've never felt
So wanted before.
I am truly yours,
So be mine too.

You are the center of my life.
I can never see you enough.
The twinkle in your eye,
The sound of your voice.

It makes me feel
Like I can fly.
And through all our days,
I hope this grand feeling,
Will never die.

Someday, I swear
We will fly together.
Above the sky
And into the stars.
This feeling,
Is really ours.

Promise me your heart,
I'll promise you mine.
Because you are the greatest man,
That I will ever find.
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Post  Shining Darkness on Sun Mar 16, 2008 3:20 pm

Nice poems press.

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Post  Cleston on Tue Mar 25, 2008 9:33 am

GET PUBLISHED OR ELSE THE WORLD WILL BE DEPRIVED AN AWESOME WRITER
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Post  Shining Darkness on Tue Mar 25, 2008 9:36 am

Lol. These days the plot/topic whatever is more important than it being great writing to some. However, since you have skill you will appeal to those who like GOOD writing, and those who like what you write about. So... If you become a writer, you'll probably do fairly well.

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Post  Cleston on Tue Mar 25, 2008 9:51 am

no kiddin
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Post  Press2000 on Tue Mar 25, 2008 10:58 am

who you talkin to?
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Post  Shining Darkness on Tue Mar 25, 2008 11:04 am

Hmm.
It was kinda directed to you, but i wrote it so anyone can read it, and comment without kinda butting in.

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Post  Press2000 on Wed Mar 26, 2008 12:36 am

oh... Embarassed thanks.
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Post  Cleston on Wed Mar 26, 2008 8:48 am

you would do well to have fun writing not just for pay but it is nice to be payed to have others read your stuff
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Post  Shining Darkness on Wed Mar 26, 2008 8:52 am

Also, don't forget your fans! When you become a writer, yes, the money is important because eventually it will help pay for.. everything. However, fans are still important.

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Post  Press2000 on Thu Mar 27, 2008 6:17 am

I want to have money for college, but yes. I'd rather have more fans than money.
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Post  Cleston on Tue Apr 01, 2008 7:31 am

good more people now worry 'bout $$$$$$ than they do the fans and readers sad to me what do you think
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Post  Press2000 on Tue Apr 01, 2008 8:56 am

uhm....could you simplify that sentence? I read it three times and still didn't get it...

hey LS, when you gonna judge this?
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Post  CottonCandy on Mon Apr 07, 2008 7:21 pm

I think he means that the authors want the money, and don't care about their fans as much.
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Post  Shining Darkness on Tue Apr 08, 2008 9:42 am

The winner is.. Hotpinkstar.

Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing

HAHA!!


Lol. Actually, you're the only person that posted so... PRESS IS THE !!!REAL!!! WINNER!

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Post  CottonCandy on Tue Apr 08, 2008 10:43 am

Yays for Press!
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Post  Shining Darkness on Tue Apr 08, 2008 11:51 am

yep.

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Post  Shining Darkness on Tue Apr 08, 2008 11:52 am

actually, error in my judging!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

1) One poem per person


one of presses rules in here contest. See, i had same rules.


She posted two, but she was only person so... no winner. Im sorry.

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Post  Guest on Tue Apr 08, 2008 12:05 pm

uhm, i no this is kinda out dated and late, but i got a easter song/poem.

Little Bunny Foo-foo
Walkin though the forest
stepped in Some chocolate
and it squished between his toes

yay me. Laughing

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