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Easter Poems

Post  Shining Darkness on Thu Mar 06, 2008 6:41 am

This is like Press2000's easter poetry contest, but she wanted to be able to post in one (unbiased), so same rules. And thus, if you want to put more than one in the contest, use this one for a second poem.
K?

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Re: Easter Poems

Post  Press2000 on Fri Mar 07, 2008 6:58 am

Why?


It's so hard to know,
What I do.
And to carry on,
With the life I do.
And it always seems,
Like your eyes see right through,
Into my core, center of my soul.
And hurt me,
Kill me,
With words I can not face.
And leave me with no choice,
But the silence been chosen.
Does it give you pleasure,
To call me names?
And to show your hate?
And then come up,
And lie to my face?
Does it make you smile,
To see me in pain,
Watching the days go by
In the silence I chose?
What had I ever done,
But be myself
And carry a smile?
And you hated me,
Because I was born this way.
Does it make you feel strong,
To bring me down?
To watch me bleed
On this silent ground?

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Re: Easter Poems

Post  Shining Darkness on Fri Mar 07, 2008 9:42 am

Hmm.. So far, you're poem is winning Press2000.


Big suprise huh? *puts down sarcasm smily*

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Re: Easter Poems

Post  Press2000 on Sun Mar 09, 2008 4:10 am

Well it's hard not to be winning when you're the only one that's entered.






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Post  Shining Darkness on Sun Mar 09, 2008 5:42 am

That was the point.

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Post  Press2000 on Sun Mar 09, 2008 5:52 am

oh.

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Post  Press2000 on Thu Mar 13, 2008 2:13 am

All Our Days

I've never seen,
A sweeter smile.
I've never felt,
A greater feeling.

I've never been loved,
The way you love me.
I've never loved anyone,
The way I love you.

I've never felt
So wanted before.
I am truly yours,
So be mine too.

You are the center of my life.
I can never see you enough.
The twinkle in your eye,
The sound of your voice.

It makes me feel
Like I can fly.
And through all our days,
I hope this grand feeling,
Will never die.

Someday, I swear
We will fly together.
Above the sky
And into the stars.
This feeling,
Is really ours.

Promise me your heart,
I'll promise you mine.
Because you are the greatest man,
That I will ever find.

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Re: Easter Poems

Post  Shining Darkness on Sun Mar 16, 2008 10:20 am

Nice poems press.

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Re: Easter Poems

Post  Cleston on Tue Mar 25, 2008 4:33 am

GET PUBLISHED OR ELSE THE WORLD WILL BE DEPRIVED AN AWESOME WRITER

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Re: Easter Poems

Post  Shining Darkness on Tue Mar 25, 2008 4:36 am

Lol. These days the plot/topic whatever is more important than it being great writing to some. However, since you have skill you will appeal to those who like GOOD writing, and those who like what you write about. So... If you become a writer, you'll probably do fairly well.

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Re: Easter Poems

Post  Cleston on Tue Mar 25, 2008 4:51 am

no kiddin

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Re: Easter Poems

Post  Press2000 on Tue Mar 25, 2008 5:58 am

who you talkin to?

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Re: Easter Poems

Post  Shining Darkness on Tue Mar 25, 2008 6:04 am

Hmm.
It was kinda directed to you, but i wrote it so anyone can read it, and comment without kinda butting in.

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Post  Press2000 on Tue Mar 25, 2008 7:36 pm

oh... Embarassed thanks.

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Re: Easter Poems

Post  Cleston on Wed Mar 26, 2008 3:48 am

you would do well to have fun writing not just for pay but it is nice to be payed to have others read your stuff

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